Author Topic: WHO'S THE DARK HORSE AT FOLLYFOOT? A new story for everyone to write.  (Read 323 times)

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Re: WHO'S THE DARK HORSE AT FOLLYFOOT? A new story for everyone to write.
« Reply #15 on: February 24, 2017, 02:47:31 PM »
'Ere mate- get me out of here. I don't fancy keeping that company- I mean he could have been a criminal.
'How do you know it's a him?'
Well whoever it is I want out Steve- NOW!'
'It can't do you any harm. Don't be such a wimp!'
Steve felt himself being shoved from behind and then he was at the bottom of the hole with Ron. The torch had flown out of his hand and hit Ron on the head. It went out and all was darkness.
'Help' yelled Steve. Ron groaned
'You ok mate?' asked Steve stretching out his hand. Then he heard a laugh  horrible and eerie sounding. There was a flash of lightning and a loud clap of thunder. Then it started to pour down with rain. 
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Re: WHO'S THE DARK HORSE AT FOLLYFOOT? A new story for everyone to write.
« Reply #16 on: March 02, 2017, 09:06:59 PM »
''Look'' shouted Dora, ""Our tree, it's been damaged by the storm, it's all dark and twisted.''
''A bit like you Ron'' exclaimed Steve, ''blimey, get me out quick'', Ron's gone all funny, his hair's fallen out and his teeth have gone
all shiny, it should be the other way round'' said Steve, ''Help, help !''. Ron slowly edged forwards. Dora screamed. Slugger groaned,
he still couldn't get his pancakes right, he threw them down the hole.
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« Reply #17 on: March 05, 2017, 09:51:03 PM »
Steve tried to clamber out of the hole but slid on the pancakes, which flipped back behind him and landed on Ron's face.

"Aaargh!!!" yelled Ron. "The ghost has got me!" He scrabbled frantically at his face but the pancakes, sticky and now muddy, had suctioned on. "I can't breathe!"

"You're hopeless, right," snapped Phyllis. "There's no such thing as ghosts." Feeling smug and important and determined to show people how it was done - which was true of anything and anyone she encountered - she jumped down into the hole, felt her way past an astonished Steve to Ron, and pulled the pancakes from him.

"Ta," said Ron, never thinking he'd ever have a reason to say thanks to Phyllis.

"Well, Miss Smartypants," Steve said. "Since you're so good at fixing things, how are you going to get us out of here?"
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Re: WHO'S THE DARK HORSE AT FOLLYFOOT? A new story for everyone to write.
« Reply #18 on: March 08, 2017, 11:06:10 PM »
"Simple," said Phyllis with a smile "we just dig out some soil and pile it up until we can stand on it and get out."  Steve and Ron looked at each other as Phyllis dropped to her knees and started digging with her hands.  "And 'ow long d'ya fink that'll take us?" Ron moaned.  Steve, however, was impressed with Phyllis' idea and started digging himself.  "Come on Ron, it's a good idea and the sooner you start helping the sooner we'll be out of here."  Ron shrugged and sighed and then dug his fingers into the soil at the bottom of the hole, scooping out a handful and throwing it onto the small pile that was forming next to Phyllis.  He looked at the skeleton and grabbed his arm.  "You couldn't give us an 'and too could ya mate?" he joked waving the hand about like a puppet.  Suddenly the thunder and lightning started again only much worse.  Then there was a loud crack and Dora screamed as the lightning tree fell to the ground, covering the hole.


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Re: WHO'S THE DARK HORSE AT FOLLYFOOT? A new story for everyone to write.
« Reply #19 on: March 21, 2017, 11:40:21 AM »
''Are you alright down there'' shouted Slugger. ''Yes, that's much better'' answered Ron, ''we're not getting wet anymore. Any chance of some
nourishing food. Or is that a silly question?'' Slugger found a gap in the branches and threw down a cold burnt sausage.
There was a loud 'clunk' sound and then a blood curdling scream. ''What's happening'' yelled Dora. Suddenly the rain eased. Slugger
shone a torch into the hole. ''Blimey' he said, ''It must 'ave 'it Phyllis on the head, she's out stone cold.'' ''Must have been painful''
replied Dora, ''That was a terrible scream''. ''It wern't Phyllis 'oo screamed'' said Ron, ''It was the skeleton''. The skeleton lay there, a
pained expression on it's face.The sausage had rebounded and got stuck in it's throat.
''Good Lord'' exclaimed the Colonel, peering into the hole through a gap in the Lightning Tree, ''Just look at that scrawny, emaciated, withered old thing at the bottom.''
''I know'' exclaimed Steve, ''But Phyllis can't help how she looks.''
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Re: WHO'S THE DARK HORSE AT FOLLYFOOT? A new story for everyone to write.
« Reply #20 on: March 21, 2017, 10:34:10 PM »
"You lot should stop messing about!" said the Colonel. "I'm going into my study to phone the Fire Brigade. They're the only ones who can lift the tree up and get you all out of that hole. And I'd better call the Police and Ambulance services as well. I think Phyllis may need treatment, and we'll have to tell the police about that skeleton. I mean, it could have been a murder victim!"

"Perhaps it just ate some of your stew, Slugs!" smirked Ron.

While the Colonel walked back to the farmhouse, Dora looked sadly at the remains of the Lightning Tree. The old rotten wood had split open and among the splinters she found a small metal box, about four inches long and six inches wide. She picked it up and shook it. It made a rattling sound, as if it contained a lot of coins. There was a small keyhole on one side, but it was firmly locked and there was no key.

"Dora, I've phoned the Emergency Services! Let's hope they come quickly!" shouted the Colonel, as he ran out of the farmhouse.

"Oh! Uncle! Look what I've just found!" said Dora, showing him the rusty old metal box.

"Good Lord!" exclaimed the Colonel, picking up the grimy object. "I never in my life believed that I'd see this again!"

"But what is it?" asked his niece.
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« Reply #21 on: March 22, 2017, 07:59:40 AM »
The Colonel was pondering the fallen tree, concerned about Steve, Ron and Phyllis trapped underneath it.

"Oh, those sovereigns," he muttered.

"Sovereigns!" Dora exclaimed, thinking that gold sovereigns would give Follyfoot the means to go on for years - they were worth a fortune if the noise inside the box was any indication. Why on earth hadn't Uncle mentioned it before?

She rattled the box and because it was wet from the storm it flew out of her hands, straight between two of the limbs of the fallen tree and into the hole. Dora wailed.

"Ouch!" yelled Steve. "That was my arm!"

"Crikey," said Ron, "what are all these yellow things? They look like chocolate coins!"
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« Reply #22 on: April 19, 2017, 05:47:34 PM »
"They are chocolate coins" said Steve, rubbing his arm, "And there's a chocolate Santa too."
"I'm starving" answered Ron, biting into the Santa. "Ouch" he groaned, "They're not chocolate, they're tin" he exclaimed, "you numbskull
 Steve." "No, this is the numbskull Ron" replied Steve, pointing to the skeleton.
"Blimey" said Ron, "It's got a coin in it's teeth now, 'ope it's got a good set of gnashers."
"I think so" said Steve, "It looks like it's had it's fair share of calcium." "How can you tell?" asked Ron.
"Well, it's bones seem perfect" remarked Steve, "It seems in pretty good condition."
"Considering bones are all what's left of it and it's dead, yeah, it's in immaculate condition" declared Ron "It makes Slugger look healthy." "And it don't keep it's teeth in a mug by the bed at night either" said Phyllis, coming round.
"How did you know that?" asked Steve.
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